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Posted July 31, 2006 - 8:48pm by zeedaam
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I would like an extensive critique of my image please.

A friend of mine that honored me with a great photo shoot.

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by Dex - Aug 11 2006 - 7:09pm
Sorta like the shot Zee, but the blown highlights only detract from the comp, the border is quite severe and I'm slightly niggled about the negative space, try adding positive perhaps, hope I'm not too harsh, hey model is fine though, just my humble opinion boss! never much shout on glamour shots here, there should be more IMHO, I have had some wine if the above makes no sense.http://www.dphoto.co.uk

Dex......

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by zeedaam - Aug 16 2006 - 12:40am
I agree with you. It is a little blown out. The border was my attempt to add some 80s styling to the image. She already had it started with the clothing and pose. I'm also thinking of doing different backgrounds with some of the other shots I have. Thanks for the comments, they help stir more ideas for the future.