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Warm Lotus

Posted November 14, 2006 - 9:05pm by zeedaam
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I would like an extensive critique of my image please.

This is a portrait of a friend I took a few months ago. The photo is on the warm side, hopefully the sharpness doesn't detract from the subject.

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by Dex - Nov 16 2006 - 4:12pm
Nice simple shot Zee, gentle, I see a soft kind person, I think the portrait would benifit from catchlights though. It may pay to lighten the shot for web as her hair blends into the background a tad, I can see the detail is there I just have to strain my eyes to find it. http://www.dphoto.co.uk

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by zeedaam - Nov 17 2006 - 12:55pm
thanks for the comments. yeah it's a lot darker on my work computer than at home. this is a left over pic from my old camera too, slow lens and useless flash. I tried using some lights on the face last night, I'll post them soon.