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Paper Curl

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A single sheet of A4 paper curled up, and a bit of DOF to give a nice abstract :)

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zeedaam's picture

I love the composition and use of negative space. Its so Tim Burtonish!

Timelode's picture

I was thinking more along the lines of Twilight Zone. It has an ethereal quality to it. Mysterious actually. The composition is very good. It somehow makes me feel a little agitated. That may be good depending on what your intentions are.

Hal9000's picture

Good composition.
You really got the perfect angle on the paper.
It enhances the natural phi spiral edge.

dollyllama's picture

It's simple and zen. Stark contrast both in color and clarity. It is fascinating in that you know exactly what it is but there's still mystery to it.

Folly's picture

The agitated feel maybe the VERTIGO effect! :) Twilight Zone, yes and Zeedaam beat me to it. !st thing I thought of was Jack from Nightmare Before Christmas. I agree will all of the comments so it = VERY WELL DONE! :)

mac16's picture

It is so simple yet so complex. I love it.

jimt's picture

neat!

bchrisdesigns's picture

This reminds me of Nightmare Before Christmas!!! :)

bigrc's picture

Yea, I agree with Timelode. Even before I started reading comments, the first thing I thought was Twilight Zone. Great shot, thanks for sharing.