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View from a Train

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Shot on a train trip aboard Amtrak's Southwest Chief. I don't even know where this is, someplace in Kansas I think.

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Hal9000's picture

Very nice shot.
My only suggestion, for these types of shots, hails back to art training; I would have shot this
with 2/3 sky, like a Dutch painting. The sky is the very dramatic, and seeing less of the field
rows would not diminish it's effect.

fd3rd's picture

I rode the Chief as a kid, pre Amtrak! It was the Atchison, Topeka and Santa Fe back then. Can't help wondering what a little slower shutter speed might do. Slow enough to blur the immediate foreground but hold the background without blur.