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ALONG THE LOCKPORT CANAL

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ALONG THE BANKS OF THE LOCKPORT CANAL, NY

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Mallory's picture

I LOVE this! The angle, comp, colors, crispness, geometry ... great work!

LosdaBear's picture

Great colors in these buildings. I think the composition could use some work though quite honestly. One, something needs to be straight up and down. Either that or it needs to be more abstract. I think maybe if you were more centered on the yellow and red buildings and showed more building and maybe part of the canal to show some context or showed less. As it is it leaves me feeling like it is only a snapshot... Of course I could just be blowing all this out my you know what and if that is the case please ignore all of the above. :)

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marson's picture

Color contrast and comp is nice. I would like to see it with the houses straight and the top of the fence cropped out of the bottom, or more of it shown.